Hello Ciara! :D
This story just keeps on becoming more and more mind-blowing! Like, seriously, you are so talented! I'm in awe...
I still love how you write Draco, and in present tense, too! He just seems so collected, and it's evident when he thinks about Death. It's just how I would have imagined him, no matter where he ends up after the war. You write him so beautifully, too, and I can really feel the coolness the possesses.
The little mentions of Narcissa and Lucius were sweet. I found it so lovely that he had a picture of his parents on their wedding day! That's just a really...realistic touch, I think.
Yay, more Pansy!!! She's quite the temptress, isn't she? I love how she's a character that you can't quite grasp as to what she will do next. One minute, you think she's small and vulnerable, the next she's cool and "Slytheriny", hehe.
Ohh, the plot is getting thicker and thicker! So much mystery! The Dynasty have quite a scheme going...a sort of smart one, too! I just hope Pansy doesn't get too caught up in it. Also, I think that the Dynasty's plan is quite a modern touch, which I really, really admire. It's so believable, too! Really, it's genius, Ciara! :D
Draco and Pansy's chemistry seems absolutely perfect. I adore reading the kind of relationship they have, and you've written it brilliantly. When the narrator mentions about when Pansy has said "I love you", I just thought it was so in-character, and I loved how different each of the situations were.
Simply stunning work, as always. This story is just...ahhh, I must read on!!! :D
ps: OPERATION: GREEN WITH ENVY! :D
Author's Response: You are amazing, I don't know how you come up with so many things to say in each review! Don't get me wrong, I love it, but when I review novels I end up saying uh... repeat repeat repeat.
Well, I write her that way because Draco doesn't really know what she's going to do next. Do they love one another? Does she love him, if he loves her? He has no idea. He doesn't care. He is, in a lot of ways, a simple guy. He wants to be with her, so he is.
Whether Pansy will get caught up in it I cannot say ;) She is, in some ways, already caught up in it, and Draco thinks about this later in the fic, so you'll get a better understanding of her situation.
Thank you so much, as always!!!