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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
Hello again! :D

I must say, I'm addicted. This story, the dynasty portrayed, the characters, the mystery, the writing, the metaphors - it's all so incredibly enthralling!

The diary entry at the beginning was fantastic! I always love it when they're travelling differently to the chapter. And the bit at the and about Pansy made me laugh :P

I really, really love how you write Wizarding Aristocracy. Your descriptions are so...eerie? Either way, I love how you include the fact that they bend the law's and have been Death Eaters and all that. It just makes it seem so real.

I'm so pleased Pansy was in this chapter!!! *dances* I really am glad that you've kept her with a few imperfections, while still saying that they are what made her so unique. It was so beautifully worded; I could picture everything so clearly!

I may have found a couple of typo's... *hides* please don't hate me!!! Ahem:
"I't's an golden opportunity." - one too many apostrophe's in 'it's', and it should be 'a' not 'an' :)
"I've got a girlfriend likes to make friends." - are you missing 'who' after 'girlfriend'? :)

BACK TO THE SQUEEE FEST! It was so funny to see Draco and Pansy bicker. They're both fiery characters, and you have definitely done them justice. You have made Pansy so memorable, too! In the books, she sometimes just seemed like another rude Snake, but WOW you have given her such a string characterisation and life of her own!

You included more Slytherins! Yay! Honestly, you have kept everything with the elite Slytherin air, never once faltering, and it's just so incredible! Also, I adored your use of animal metaphors in this. It just makes this dynasty even more secretive when they're not directly referring to anything. Gah, it's so thrilling!

Yet another incredible chapter, Ciara! This story is just...wow. It's amazing! To the next one! :D

-Lizzie xo

ps: OPERATION: GREEN WITH ENVY

Author's Response: The metaphors are so much fun to write because they are soo over the top. Like honestly. when could you ever write anything like that?

I originally wrote this story just so I could give Pansy some of the glory she deserves. She's just so horrid but at the same time so fabulous. And I think this is the kind of Pansy that Draco really would have fallen in love with.

There will be a lot of random canon appearances through the fic, it will contain little to no OC's, so I hope you enjoy them!

Thanks love!!!


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