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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
CIARA!!! Hello! Told you I'd review ;)

Okay, WOW! My god, this is amazing! Absolutely amazing! Your writing is honestly phenomenal, and I think I may now adore present tense. It just add's something even more unique to this. I just wonder why I haven't found this earlier, haha!

Also, I do love the mystery surrounding this, too. It makes me wonder if Draco is the narrator or if there's a little bird following him around...either way, I adore it!

This was so engrossing. I couldn't look away at all, and you had me hooked right from the beginning. I really loved how you opened this with the diary entry. I really think you have captured Draco in a very, very unique way, but still keeping him cold and mysterious like the Draco we all know and love.

I don't think I've ever seem a plot-line like this! And I must commend you for using a canon character as the missing girl. I have always remembered her from the books, and it's great to see someone using her in a story! The way you've set this whole thing up is spectacular, and not once did I lose track of the characters.

This was an incredible first chapter, Ciara! I absolutely loved it!*is honoured to run your fanclub* I hope this review made some sort of sense...onwards to the next chapter!! ^_^

-Lizzie xo

ps: OPERATION: GREEN WITH ENVY ;)

Author's Response: Awww hon I could not believe it when I came on here and saw I had SEVEN new reviews from you! It really made like my entire week. Especially because this story is not very popular, even though I am still really proud of it.

I decided to write it in third person because I felt like, although with this genre it is usually in first person, having it in third would be a little more believable with Draco's character. I had to bend his characterization a little bit for the role he is playing, but I don't think I broke it. That was why I included the diary entries at first, to give a little throwback to the general first person narrative of this style of writing.

What's so funny is that I always hear from people that they thought I meant Rose Weasley at first! When I wrote this I actually completely forgot about Rose. WHich is funny because now she is a main charrie in my other novel fic. Draco in this story is like 24ish so Rosie wouldn't be born yet.

I feel like you should have a fanclub, you're so amazing. That is so, so flattering. Online best friends :D

Thank you so much!


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