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Review:slytherangoddess says:
I like this story so much :D Even though its non-canon. :)

I did find some little fix-it things to watch out for (its the writing major in me):
--Dialogue in a paragraph must match action in a paragraph. Meaning make sure who ever is talking in the paragraph is the one who has the action after the dialogue. Sometimes it was tough to figure out who was talking to whom
--The second is just some spelling and grammar issues. nothing too distracting, but i think there was a "3was" in there somewhere

Other than that I think it was a wonderful fic.

**runs away to review the sequel**


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