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Review:huffleherbs says:
I love Lily! Of course I was going to read this and enjoy it! :D

Song-fics have always seemed cheesy and kind of lazy to me (I bet this'll bite me one day and I'll end up writing one!) but this is very well-written. I understand that it's for a challenge, so will ignore that it's not in my preferred format. *finishes sound arrogant*
You've written it perfectly around the lyrics, and the language melds with the lyrics brilliantly. I'd love to read more of this, purely because youíve seemed to capture the agony that Snape must have felt throughout his life. His constant torment really comes through in this, although in some ways it comes across as a bit too "fresh". That's my only real flaw with the whole thing. EDIT: he doesn't seem too torn up that he pretty much killed her. Only that he lost her in the sixth year. That might just be my interpretation though!

Keep writing, re-request reviews when the next chapters are up, and I hope that I helped, although I can't really offer advice to improve!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your awesome review! I, too, am not huge on song-fics, but I appreciate that you read it all the same. ^^

I think the freshness stems from the fact that Snape is still forced to relive his worst memory on a weekly basis, via his dreams, so it's always 'fresh' in his mind. If that makes sense?

I will definitely re-request with future chapters - thank you so much for this!!


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