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Review:ericajen says:
Hello there(:

Is it weird that when I clicked into this story I was expecting like a romantic comedy type of piece? After reading the story, I'm not completely sure what I was thinking.

Anyway, I thought it was really good. You moved seamlessly through Molly and Jimmy's relationship. It didn't feel awkward at all the way they transitioned from just met, to living together, etc. It worked out really, well, actually. Even more impressive was that although we didn't go through all of the trials and such at the beginning of their relationship, it was still easy to sense that they really cared for each other.

I liked the way Molly's photography tied into everything. And the little air of mystery at the end when he heard the camera click once more and then disappear. Makes me curious, heh.

You worked incredibly well with the song, as well. I don't read a lot of songfics, but this one was particularly enjoyable. I liked the way the lyrics fit with the story.

Nice work(:

Erica.

Author's Response: Hello Erica,
Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and review this fic! Haha, no, this isn't a romantic comedy. To be honest, I'm horrible at writing romcoms and if I ever attempt a romcom, I don't think you'd want to read it. Fluff and humor are my absolute weakest genres. ;)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the progression of Molly and Jimmy's relationship. Again, romance is another of my weak genres. I think I have a tendency to make all romantic interaction corny, hehe.

And I'm really happy to hear that you liked the song. I don't think I've ever read a song-fic myself, to be honest. However, I do love folk music and I just thought it'd be interesting to try to write something including an old-fashioned song in a contemporary setting. I'm so glad you thought it turned out all right. ^_^

Again, thanks so much for the great feedback, Erica! It was really wonderful hearing from you. Take care and be well!

Best,
celticbard


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