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Review:KateRhodes says:
Oh my God!
Okay, so first the ambush... I liked it. You described the thrill of the battle pretty well. I could see Iris hexing people and making her way in this trance like state... I guess when you're in life threatening danger you do not really think but just act, like she was doing.
I find her relationship with Moody beyond hilarious, I love it!
Then... I didn't really get that line on 'If I'd known' after she saved/protected Lily and James... is that a reference to their deaths and Harry and all?
Then... oh well... ADOPTION?
This was beyond unexpected!
I liked the chapter, I found it pretty funny :)
I am confused though, does Ace actually live in East London?
Well, what can I say? I just need another chapter to see how Iris adapts to this... erhm... new fairy tale like life style!
By the way, I can't wait to "see" (in my mind I will) Mary's face when everyone finds out about Iris moving in with this actress/celebrity woman!
This was so surprising that I just realized Sirius wasn't in the chapter AND I DID NOT MISS HIM. Okay, yeah, maybe a little bit but IRIS ADOPTED? Shocking enough not to miss the handsomest man in the Wizarding world :)
Great fic, great update, great job...
Oh dear, you're just amazing! :)
Update soon please! PleasE! Please!

Author's Response: The 'If I'd known' line WAS a reference to Lily and James' deaths etcetera, she felt compelled to do something because they're so important etc but there will be LOADS more on that later.

I really wasn't actually at all happy with this chapter, I ended up rushing it but I will be going back and editing, perhaps adding a few things in too :D

Ace does live in East London, or his family do at least. As far as Mary's concerned, all the girls already think she's all rich and stuff so they'd think that she'd always been with Marie or something similar.

The next chapter is up! So enjoy!

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