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Review:Cal585 says:
So I had some free time and decided to read this, as I said I would. I hope you'll forgive me though, as I'm not much of a reviewer. I must say her lack of speech was definitely an interesting point, one that I'm not sure what I think about it. I noticed it more in the conversation with Fred where she only replies mentally and I felt a little frustrated that she never responded verbally. I suppose maybe I'm worried about her because she could communicate to Fred non-verbally but now that he's gone I don't how she'll cope. I must say though that it was very emotive. Fred's funeral was very well portrayed. Kepp it up! :)

Author's Response: Cal! ^.^ You're so timely! You say you'll review, and boom! You do! I'm so slow at reviewing, so I'll switch this around and ask for your forgiveness about the fact that it might take me a while to get to yours!

I'm glad Josephine's conversational flaws are intriguing, even if a bit frustrating at times. I mean, it is a bit frustrating! She won't talk! And the poor thing, I worry about her, too. But part of life is learning to adjust to the circumstances, and if you stick around, you'll see how Jo does! ;-) I'm really glad that the funeral scene stuck out, as it was a difficult and emotion scene to write, so it's wonderful to hear that the it's affecting the readers the way it was intentioned to! Thank you for the review, Cal; it's truly appreciated! And I'll be seeing you over at your story sometime soon as well, yeah?? ^.^


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