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Review:Leela says:
Nice story, so far.

The only thing I don't like is that -so far- the story seems to be about Avaira and James, her dread and visions only. I get that she can't forget what's going to happen, but there's nothing at all about anything else in her life. I can't really say what she's like either, her character seems very vague to me. She's just whining all the time and acting pretty immaturely.

I like how you describe her friends, James and Fred, though. And I like the Fred/Alice thing, no matter how that turns out.
I like the way you write. How you put little details expertly into the story. You create their world and it's not a boring explanation or list of things-to-know-about-them.

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