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Review:blackthoughtsredwriting says:
First off I have to say that the story title and summary are simply amazing. They like jumped out at me and kicked me in the face and said "Hey you, read this story." Anyways, the scene was emotional. I like emotional. I like how you added bits of humor in the story but not overdoing it to much.

It's sad how people change like you portrayed in this chapter. I think this is the type of change that is emotional for most.

Reading this story got me thinking about how I would handle a situation like this or how I would feel in real life and I think when a person can relate to a story in real life, or starts thinking about how things like this could play out outside the story, then you've written a good story.

I found nothing wrong with this story at all. While there was really only once scene, the plot itself was very smooth and detailed.

I give this story a 10/10 and shall be adding it to my favorites. Please update soon =]

blackthoughtsredwriting

Author's Response: This was such a lovely review to receive.

The story title was one I was saving up for another story for ages, but I saw the banner and the concept formed and I was like "Eh, why not?" so on it went.

People changing is sometimes sad, but in this case, I really suppose it was for the better. Percy/Penny wasn't fated to happen and they both eventually find other people.

I'm so happy that it applied out of the story! It was just a really lovely review to receive and I'm thrilled you enjoyed the little story!

Celeste

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