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Review:secret snitch says:
Absolutely one of the cutest stories I've ever read. I loved your metaphor of baking a cake, it was very clever. And the way the knight story was told was perfect. I wasn't sure how to take Harry's writing the proposal in the sky, if it was literal or stood for something else (say putting it in the Daily Prophet?). But anyway, good work and keep writing.
--Chris

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad people have enjoyed this story - it was one of those things that gets stuck in your head and then just appears on the computer screen, and I wasn't sure if it was too cheesy, so all the positive feedback has been lovely.

As for the sky writing... I really want to say that yes, it was another metaphor, but actually I just imagined him literally conjuring word-shaped clouds. Almost makes me want to re-write the ending...

Thanks so much for reading this, and for letting me know what you thought of it.


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