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Review:writers_passion says:
hello there!

feels good to be review #1 (unless someone beats me to it within the next few seconds lol)

love the one-shot! oh lucius and his prideful nature. just the idea of him not wanting the idea because it would just prove how low he's really been reduced to was a really nice touch! very believable i'd say.

btw, i loved the line "They were what caused me to shiver." after mentioning all the thigns that he could lose. it was a really good closer :)

all in all i give a thumbs up!

p.s. completley agree to your little author's note about reviewing. things would definitely be a lot better if people bothered to leave a review instead of just reading. :)

Author's Response: Hello again :) it seems you're going through my stories lol, yay! And my first review, thank you!

As soon as I saw this challenge and saw 'pride' on this list, my first thought was immediately 'Lucius' it just fits!

I loved that line and the line on my summery page too.

Yay, a thumbs up, thank you :)

P.S. Yes, I agree with the note about reviewing too, that's why I agreed to post it. Pass it on :)

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