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Review:Aderyn says:
Hello Marina!

This really is a wonderful oneshot. I think the only thing I've read of yours is "Just Rose" which is more of a humor story. This style, however, is lovely. Your descriptions are vivid and stay consistent throughout the story. The line "Some things are beyond human comprehension, even for a Dumbledore" is one very telling sentence. For me, it's both a little bit funny as well as poignant. Ariana seems to have the same knowledge and eventual exceptional of death as her brother, Albus.

I love the dream-like quality that you give to Ariana's narration. She is detached from the living world, but somehow, the reader is still very aware of it.

So, overall, I really enjoyed reading this. I don't know how quite to say it, but the mood (or the tone or something) of the story was spot on. Wonderful job, as always!

Author's Response: I find it really interesting to see your response to this. I have written angsty stories since I joined and I think most people would associate me with that or if they've read something else first it's usually angsty. However, seeing as you read Just Rose first, it's so awesome to see you respond in this way even after reading something of mine that's humourous. I hope that makes sense, because I'm not sure it did... I just mean, thank you :P

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