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Review:Mistress says:
1. “Well…I’m not really into Quidditch, to be perfectly honest…”

Fail.
-HAHAHA. Dying laughing.

2. I know I’ve just completely screwed you, but I did it with kindness.
-HAHAHA. Seriously, this mess of people on this show work SO well together.

3. I remember when she’d first interviewed for her job with The Morning Waffle – I was one of the interviewers, and halfway through the damn thing I felt an inexplicable urge to fetch her coffee – that’s how commanding her presence was.
-Fantastic characterization. LOVE it.

4. “Well,” I began, “I was wondering, do you have any idea how I could go about making myself more attractive to women?”

“Yeah. Be somebody else.”
-Ahhh sisterly affection. There's nothing quite like it.

Ah, this was another fantastic chapter. I adore the characters. Like I have said before, and like I'm sure you know, James has a special place in my disfunctional heart. It seriously BREAKS my HEART every time he is sad about his dead Quidditch career. You have guts to write about it, considering he's my little baby and I could never have him go through that, hahaha.

ANYWAY, I love Fred. And all of them. I'm really excited to see what warrants the slash!

Fabulous!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you pointed out the line about the Hufflepuff look. I had a lot of fun in general writing all the 'Puff jokes. Good way to turn the normal House characterization on its head, I thought - NOT AS SWEET AND LOVELY AS THEY LOOK!

Roxy starts out like this and becomes progressively more like Satan's mistress throughout the fic. I don't know why, but the thought of her life just being one huge strop makes me crack up.

I have really ripped James to shreds about this Quidditch thing. I won't go into great detail explaining how I got the idea, because it'll be like 3 pages long, but I wanted to get away a little bit from the usual James II characterization, and do something that hasn't been done before (at least that I've seen) - so I made him down to earth, then destroyed his career and made him mopey. Yes, I am the devil. XD The back story is actually in a WIP short story I haven't worked on in months - needs heavy editing and then a couple more chapters, but I consider it somewhat of a companion fic to TMW.

Thank you again!

xoxo
Melanie


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