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Review:NeverGotHerLetter says:
Oh WOW! This was so good! I totally loved it! My favourite character of ALL TIME is James I, and I think you portrayed him brilliantly, showing both sides to him, in the Great Hall, the true brave Gryffindor, and then at the end, the immature, cocky Potter :)
Also, I like that you added a little reference about Sirius and Regulus Black's relationship as it gives us something to remember, it's canon and it reminds us about their relationship, and the fact that Regulus was a death eater.
I love that you made Lily chuckle at the end of the chapter, instead of making her angry, as it shows that she is close to breaking point about saying yes to going out with him (YEESSS!!) :D
I think the song totally went with the story, and I love the relationship between Lily and James in this. Also, as much as I love OCs (I have 2 or 3 myself) :) you kept this entirely canon, which made me think about whether this could have "really happened" if you get what I mean. It was so believable, it gave a taster of what the First Wizarding War could have been like at the beginning.
It showed us worries and pain and house rivalry etc., with those little Beatles and Potter and Lily/James twists we all know and love :)
This story made me really happy, so 10/10 :)
~NeverGotHerLetter x x x x x x
P.S., that is a totally AWESOME banner!! :D x x x x

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your nice review and I apologize for the lateness of my reply; life got crazy and I couldn't find time to come over this place...

I'm glad you enjoyed my little one-shot and my James; I loved both sides of his personality and couldn't help throw the cocky comment at the end!

I did picture this story to happen before they become a couple but at a point where they admit to at least share friendship. I read a lot of stories that focus on moments when they hate each other or when they are completly in love but rarely did I read stories happening when they are just friends.

Your comment : "this could have really happened", that made my day! Seriously, I know it's far fetched to imagine DE breaking in the school and that's why I didn't make it a huge event (i.e. no death or heroic moments). I simply wanted the message of Voldemort's power to be shared with the characters and bring them to have this discussion about what the future would be like for them.

Thanks again for your kind words and I am really happy that this made you happy!! Oh and I forwarded your compliment about the banner to the maker; she's the one that deserves them afterall!!

Akussa

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