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Review:Marzipan says:
This was such a cute little piece of finding lost love! I love your Victorie - not the super confident and perfect version you often see of her. She's too proud, and she can't cook, but she's independent and loving and loyal, and overall very real. I liked the shortness of the piece - it was like a short breath of fresh air, and you had some really nice turns of phrase - but, woah! You went a bit comma happy in places, so much so that it slowed me down and made reading a bit difficult. Maybe go through and try to weed some of those out, or get someone who knows what they are looking for to help you, because otherwise this is a lovely one-shot! Great job!

Author's Response: Hi!
Thank you for uch a nice review. Me and comma don't get along. I used to never use them so now I use them every where.

I will go over it though :)

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx


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