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Review:orderofthephoenix says:
This is heart-wrenching, especially the letter. I could feel Teddy's remorse and Victoire's pain. I'm a Teddy/Victoire shipper so I'm so glad it ended as it did! :D

Your French is good, don't worry. I knew what that meant :)

Only one slight mistake, I think. 'My partner, Kate, nearly died I saved her, from falling down four floors.'
I think it should be more like: 'My partner, Kate, nearly died. I saved her from falling down four floors'.

I did like how you characterised Victoire. I thought she had a bit of Fleur in her and then you confirmed it in the Author's Note!!

Well done! :)

-Sophia xx

Author's Response: Hi!
I am a newly converted Teddy/Vic shipper. I love them.
Well that is a relief. I shall fix that mistake when I am torn away from the review thread haha.

I tried to unmagic this story for english and I forgot to explain how Teddy just appeared. My teacher was just like, how did he get in the house? Not my finest hour.

She did, I didn't want to make her a carbon copy but I needed her to have something and this is what came of it.

Thank You for the awesome review again :)

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx


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