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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hi RandomRed here from the forums and the birthday thread.

This is the cutest story I have read in along time. It is sooo sweet and cute.

The part I love is the story seems so simple but the concept of the cupcake and everything is actually complexer than you first think, it is really well done.

There are so many lines that just made me smile, a really good feel good fic. That also makes me giggle in some places.
Like here:
"Into his bedroom?" the little girl questioned sleepily. "But, he might have been in his pyjamas."

Such a sweet story, really glad I got to read it. I doubt I would have found it if it hadn't been in the review thread. :D

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

Author's Response: Wow, what a lovely and thoughtful review! I'm glad you liked the dual layer aspect of the story - that was a big part of my reason for writing it: to try out a new style. I wasn't sure if I'd got the balance right, so your words mean a lot.

I'm also glad it made you smile and giggle, as obviously it's supposed to be a feel-good story. And yay - I was worried about whether the interjections from Lily had worked, so I'm glad you picked out that line to comment on!

Thanks so much for taking the time to write this review!


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