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Review:TheProphecy says:
Hello,

Your review as promised :) Sorry about the mix up :(

Anyway, I kind of liked this. It had all the good elements of a fic, well written, nice build up good emotions etc.But the only thing that kinda ruined it was the horrendous amount of OOC Draco and a couple of clichés.

I kinda felt Draco accepted it wayy to easily. The Draco I knew would have fought his feelings before embracing them and would probably have been even more horrible to Hermione because of it.

Sorry I just totally criticised your whole plot :O But I did like it anyway despite the Clichéness.

I thought Snape and Ron and Harry were all done well and I did like Hermione at the beginning :)

Sorry if it feels like all criticism I did really like it :)

Hannah x

Author's Response: Hey Hannah!

Don't worry about all the criticism. I happily accept that this is my worst story, very OOC and totally cliched.

I think I might delete this pretty soon ;)

Thanks for the compliments (which were what exactly?). Hehe. I know you mean well ;)

-Sophia x

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