Another gem from your pen, my dear. For me a revelation as I'm not too keen on reading next-gen stories; from your pen I'd surely read anything except Draco/Hermione or Draco/Harry :D
I was drowning in the beautiful, poetic imagery all through the story. Written in impeccably clean grammar and exceptionally rich vocabulary, it rises well above the general standards of this - or any other - fanfic site, and for me, a non-native English speaker, a lust for the eye and mind.
Dominique's unrequited love is tragic. Any love, unrequited and unanswered, is tragic, but for her it's becoming unbearable, seeing that the object of her love, Scorpius, is dating her cousine, Rose. She will have to live with hit, bear the sight of their happiness, every moment of which will slowly kill her, little by little.
I'm left utterly speechless and can't do anything else but scream out my admiration of your amazing writing skills.
Now, I saw you were planning on a Cho one-shot. I also have one, called "There You'll Be". I know, I'm shameless :D it's just I'm curious what gem you will be coming up with next time :D
Full marks, of course.
Author's Response: Hello again! This is the highest praise. Really you are being far too kind and I don't believe a word of it, but it's lovely to hear all the same. Don't worry, I'm confident in saying neither of those ships will ever come from my pen!
I am so glad you enjoyed this. Description is my first love, and that's what made writing this fic so enjoyable. I don't know about clean grammar though, it's always risking for me to post without a beta's help haha! Your comment about vocabulary is extremely welcome, but I feel I need to include more of it in my future fics, though it's good to be complimented on it all the same :) Honestly you are being far, far too kind. This review has made my day.
Unrequited love IS tragic, and yet like you I love to write angst, and it's such wonderful food for the angst writer. That being said, I fear perhaps Weasley family love triangles are over done, so it's a comfort that you enjoyed it.
I hope you will enjoy the Cho one-shot if you get a chance to read it! It's odd how similar are choice of subjects to write on are haha! It's an odd one shot and I'll be interested in your feedback.
Thank you so so so much for these reviews. You praise me far too much than I deserve, but as encouragement goes this is invaluable and maybe one day with such encouragement I'll be a little more worthy of such praise!