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Review:maskedmuggle says:
HELLO MAYA!
Eep, sorry for the delay in reviewing this!

And secondly.. A MASSIVE WOW. This is so ingenious!!! The whole plot, the idea of predators and prey, such a clever idea! And this is wonderfully written too!

I LOVED THE IDEA OF THIS FIC. I have to say it's simply so original and unique! And having the A/N up there really made it all the more amusing. The whole way you wrote it was simply really good. I loved how it was connected to the way they said it on documentaries, and mentioning the animals was so clever in the way that you used them! Ooh, the ending was really great too. I loved the ending paragraph.

I loved the characterisation of James/Annette/Joanna too. Tehehe, all three were great. So I loved how James was the hunter, and like the lion. And how Joanna was the lioness. And how Annette was sort of "like an ambushed gazelle" - you really used a great simile there. I loved how James/Annette ended up together. I guess I was expecting a James manages to get Joanna story, but I really love how he realises Annette is the one.

The writing in this is brilliant! Are you getting even more awesome? It's like, utterly perfect. I can't find anything to criticise you on! All in all.. this was really amazing. Seriously, the whole idea already gave you a thousand points, but the way you wrote it, so creatively, really made this amazing.

Thanks for participating. This is succchhh!!! an amazing and lovely and really well written piece. And the whole idea behind it is simply WIN. I loved loved loved reading it, it was thoroughly enjoyable!
-Charlotte

P.S Lovely banner too! I know you made it (cos i stalkz your gallery ya know XD) IT'S SO PRETTYYY!!

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