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Review:FoundriaPenguin says:

Anyways, GOODNESS, CELESTE, THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZINGLY BRILLIANTLY STUNNING. Admittedly, I was uncertain at first on how you'd pull off Victoire shipping herself. Actually, I thought that the other Victoire was a ghost of some kind at first or something, haha! I just spent the last 10 minutes scrolling up and down the page, trying to go in order of the numbers after reading it in the order you formatted it first. THAT'S SO COOL HOW IT ALL LINKS TOGETHER LIKE THAT! Agh, you're so SMART. I envy people who can wrap their minds around this kind of with this, and I remember Miranda (FannyPrice) wrote a backwards-forwards story once, too, something equally mindboggling, I guess. :P And the organization irritating? NOT A CHANCE. It was so interesting to unravel the story bit by bit!

And your writing is MUCH TOO BEAUTIUFL! I WAS FLOATING ON CLOUDS AGAIN, I SWEAR. You put everything so eloquently and everything is so lovely and just, just.there are almost no words for how much I love your style! *flails madly* DON'T EVER THINK YOU'RE WRITING PURPLE PROSE BECAUSE YOU REALLY AREN'T. It's like that perfect balance that's nearly unattainable, but you've managed to get it right on target. ♥

You ask about which Victoire I thought it was in your A/ be honest, I thought the first girl mentioned was Victoire Weasley in the beginning because of the cbox talk. I fluctuated for a bit at the end and spent some time thinking about it, but I think the first girl is Victoire because of the "always comparing us" lines. Victoire's probably somewhat famous because she's a Weasley and her family is chock full of famous war heroes. Plus, Bertrand sounds like those fancy rich names ^_^ Even though I am probably far off, that's my current logic lol.

OH, I'VE GOT ANOTHER ADJECTIVE FOR YOUR WRITING. Really, really just magical. Poof! A one-shot of epic proportions comes out from your fingertips. And dear God, why aren't you out there getting books published already?! *coughcough*you'rewaybetterthanstepheniemeyer,okay?*coughcough*

you're turning into one of my all time favorite hpff authors ever ♥ and btw, i dunno if you saw but i added you as a favorite author after reading TSOS secretly. 8D and i'm adding this to my favorites too. i think i'm going to have to power through your entire author's page soon. *grabby hands* xD

so if you couldn't tell, i loved this. and notice how my grammar worsened as the review went on... *whistles innocently...or at least pretends to because i can't whistle :P * stop with the modesty overkill, celeste! hahaha XD

--jordan ♥

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