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Review:kaileena_sands says:
That was totally gorgeous writing! I loved the smooth flow of the story, the torrent of emotions in Victoire and the whole premise! The repetition of the eyes - "those eyes that werenít nor green nor brown nor grey nor blue." is very haunting. It almost sounded like an echo from a song in my head. Beautiful!

And I actually quite enjoyed your premise that she didn't end up with Teddy - almost no one ends up together with their high school sweethearts in real life. Teddy sounded like a wonderful man but he just didn't have that gripping quality of Lysander that haunted Victoire. Ah! I also love the meaning and symbolism of the anemones - very well done!

10/10, this was an amazing one-shot. :) I am glad we swapped. *goes to favourites*

Author's Response: hey? really? gorgeous? well thanks so much! - my face: :D :D :D You know, actually, my mum has those eyes, i cant really tell what color they are even though she uses green. I say they are blue, but she does not listen. although it does seem like a song :)

yeah, i think it needed some sort of twist as I have never really read any story of Victoire ending up with anyone that was not Teddy, although here she didn't really end up with Lysander, but walked out on Teddy in their wedding to follow her heart. He certainly was great, but for Victoire, consciously or unconsciously, it was always Lysander. And I actually had to search the meaning of flowers to find one that fit :D and anemones are purple. yay!

10/10? eeep! thank thank thank you so much for the review and for loving it and for favouriting :D :D :D :D


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