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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Uh, wow? That was ridiculously funny! How dare you be that funny! I was smiling like a madwoman throughout the whole chapter. You have a very interesting kind of snappish (I don't know how else to describe it) humour - a bit like in a situational comedy! A very good one, though. :)

Pippa is such a lovely girl (love that name) - accepts chocolate bunnies for bribe and gets fooled easily. :DD And drools after Albus' smile. :D Wonderful! And OMG! Stalkerish Lily. :D I cannot wait to see more of that. And I'll definitely see, since I am adding this to my favs. Congrats, it's really hard for me someone to hook me to a story from the first chapter, but you did it! Your writing is excellent and you manage to give sufficient insight into your characters with few well-chosen words. :)

If you didn't get it from the above, I love it. Tomorrow when I wake up, I am on to chapter 2, since I cannot wait to see what disasters shall occur in poor Pippa's life. :))

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad you think that! Really? I'm so glad you thought it was funny! I'm so glad you like my humour! No one's ever really made a comment on that before. So thanks :) I like my humour too. Haha.

I'm so glad you like Pippa & her name. Haha. I'm glad you like Lily too, she features later in the story. I'm so happy you're adding this to your favs, that means a lot to me. And wow! Really! You're so kind. This has made me smile so much!

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked this chapter & I hope you'll enjoy chapter two aswell.

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