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Review:SexyDoorFrames says:
As soon as I clicked onto this, I thought it was going to be interesting and you didn't disappoint!

With the narrators voice stuck firmly in my head, (which may be stuck in there now) I found this rather humorous and a lovely piece of fan fiction to read. I've always had a soft spot for James/Oc, so I'm glad to see that he got the right ending and the proper lady for him. I loved the last line, it was pure beauty. In fact, your description through the whole of this was excellent and I really loved this!

I loved the style, the characters and the fact that you kept on referring back to everything being animal just made it perfect.

Even though it was just a one shot, I felt like you told enough of the characters so you could understand them. I felt like they were fleshed out and actual people, which is hard to do in one chapter but you've managed to do in perfectly. I was always rooting Nettie, right from the start.

I just loved the fact that he finally saw sense. In all excellent one shot :)

- SexyDoorFrames

Author's Response: Oh god this reply is so long overdue, love!

Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked the descriptions and (especially) the narrative voice because it was the whole point of writing this whole story. :) I am happy that you took to Nettie, too! It's hard to construct a whole character in just one chapter and I am glad I didn't fail completely.

Thanks again and ily! :hug:

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