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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
I usually never read Dramiones. Ever. Ron and Hermione forever and for the win. For ever and ever.

But I liked this! You've got a great writing style and a good handle on grammar and spelling and all that. However, the flow of the story - which is sometimes very important, but usually more so in a chaptered fic so don't worry about it that much - was disrupted by writing things like 'Hermione's POV'. Your first person writing is good enough that readers will realise the change.

Overall, a little OOC (but all Dramiones are, right?) but a lovely little one-shot! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)

I know this is very OOC which is why it's not my favourite fic I've written.

I'll take out all the POV changes, thank you for the suggestion. :)

-Sophia x


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