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Review:Dalek194 says:
Poor Petunia; her parents are being very harsh! Although, I think that there was no need for her to say she hated her and that Lily is a freak, so she's being harsh too; also I'm surprised that Mr and Mrs Evans didn't think the letter was some sort of joke rather than believed it right away. One grammar thing I saw was;

- "I need to know," Lily!" I shouted (you don't need a " after the comma and before Lily)

There are very good parts to it, like Petunia's mishearing of Dumbledore's name (LOL! :-P) and the mention that Mr Evans works at Smeltings, as well as the mention of Vernon and Marge. That ties everything up nicely :-)

Overall, a good chapter, and not as pacy as the last one (that's a good thing :-D) I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

Thanks for correcting me! I'll go fix that :)

My sister was the one who suggested Dumbledore's misheard name. I'll be sure to tell her you liked it!

Thanks again for all of the amazing reviews.


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