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Review:Dalek194 says:
A nice one-shot. Like the third bar one, it is set cleverly in the main character's mind while they are somewhere else (Azkaban in this case) but wish they could be back in their memories.

I've never read much Sirius/Lily, but they are actually quite a good couple and you show this here. So nice job :-)

P.S. One question; what was the "When things get rough, Sir, just remember us." part about? I didn't get that - is that from the song? All the same, great work!

Author's Response: Yea, I really do like writing things like this, :)
It's fun, setting them in another state of mind so they can escape the situation at hand, if only for a moment.

Awh, thank you, :D
It really has become one of my favorite pairings, so I had a lot of fun writing all of their oneshots.

It's not part of the song, no.
It's part of the many lines Sirius remembers Lily saying to him. Everything is sort of just scattered (as it's stream of consciousness), and that was the first memory that brought him back to everything.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

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