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Review:Aurorofthelight says:
As usual, another stupendous chapter! You always have great battle scenes! That escape from the stronghold was so slick it would've made Houndini jealous! I also like the strategy to take out the deathknibblers & the other underlings first -- I think Dorkocles may be alittle annoyed for once! I noticed other reviewers expressed surprise that Harry could be Helena's father! I think it makes perfect sense--if Rowena forsaw this mess with Dorkocles then she would most certainly forsee that Harry would be the most powerful wizard of his time and therefore would obviously be her " chosen one" for sperm donor to create the progeny that would destroy Dorkocles (Sorry, I couldn't resist the reference)! ;) Since he isn't aware of his link to Helena, I assume that Rowena used some type of magical invitro to accomplish the deed! It's probably just as well for Rowena that she is already dead because when a certain redhead finds out she'd probably have killed her(I wonder if it's possible to bat-bogey a ghost into oblivion?)! I also like the subtle little cliffhanger you've been allowing to run thru these chapters --- what happened to Ron and the vamp! At least Mione now knows he isn't in the veil - so alittle less stress for her but he'll still get an earful from her when he finally turns up! You really have a superb writing talent & I am glad I get to partake of it thru your stories. :):):) Keep it coming! Bless you until the next installment, AOTL

Author's Response: Thank you for such a lengthy review and I am glad you have stuck with my story from the very beginning.

If you'd go back to previous chapters when Harry was remembering his time with the founders, you'll notice that there was a moment when Harry woke up naked after a training session with Rowena. Guess what she did? ;) And she better hope's Ginny doesn't find out or ghost or no ghost, Ginny will find away to get to her.

As for Ron...hmmm...who said the girl with her was vamp? ;) The time is nearing when this particular cliffhanger is brought to an end and Ron's fate will be revealed.

Thank you again and I hope to hear from you again on succeeding chapters.



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