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Review:Fallingstar says:
I say that the chapter is absolutely amazing, just like that the rest of the story.

Oh gosh, did I mention that I read everything before this chapter altogether? It was brilliant~!
I'm pretty sure that this is my first review for this fanfic, so I'm going to stuff a bunch of thoughts here.

First of all, I love how realistic and strong you made Kylie to be as a character. She's just so blunt and out there all the time, and the banter between her and Sirius is just so cute.

And then I love all the OCs you have in there, such as Bryson and Jaz (oh pink hair =D), who are astonishingly real. And then Sirius! I'm a huge fan of Sirius/OC fanfics, and I just love the way you've been writing Sirius. He's so amusing, hilarious even, and so playful the whole time through.

And now that I'm finally done raving on and on about how much I love your story, haha I just want to say that I can't wait until your next update! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
That must have been a really long read! Twenty... three chapters now? All four thousand words plus?
I've tried to make Kylie a breathable character - the kind that's round, that adjusts as time passes and is basically someone that you could know in real life. Kylie is a leap before she looks person, not the kind to let things go unsaid; like you said, she's basically all out there. I also attempt to make dialogue realistic, so hopefully I've done a good job with that one!
Sometimes I worry that it's hard to keep track of OCs, so it's good that you like mine! I got really tired of everyone writing Sirius as a self-centered jerk, so I thought that I would make him nice this time! Like Kylie, I've tried to make him breathable as well.
There's nothing wrong with raving - nothing at all! I'm glad you enjoyed it as a whole!

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