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Review:Dalek194 says:
Nice work again. The connection between Harry and Sirius is nicely written, as is Elena's shocked happiness. There are one or two grammar errors though;

- "as Elena and Sirius was fighting" (was should be were)
- "Sirius let you a chuckle." (you should be out)
- "wonít even let us play with him books" (him should be his)
- "more about babies then I did." (then should be than)

But these are very small things; I'm just being picky :-) I like it that Harry knows the Weasleys, especially the part when he tells Sirius about them. Really nice work, and please update soon!

Author's Response: I'll fix these errors when I actually finish it. But for now, their staying haha. Thanks for the lovely review though!!

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