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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hey Lily! :D
ZOMG I AM SO SO SO TERRIBLY SORRY FOR MY EXTREMELY LATE REVIEWING OF YOUR FIC! I feel horrible, but maybe the well-deserved compliments will make up for it somewhat :P

OMG THAT WAS WONDERFUL!! Seriously, I really enjoyed reading this fic. The whole idea of it is simply great! The believed-in, what Fleur and Bill did…

I loved how Fleur and Bill were, well, old, or not as young teenagers. Their characterisation seemed spot on. It's hard to imagine exactly how they would be years later, but I think you did a really good job on your portrayal of them.

Can I say how amazing your writing is? That whole first section totally blew me away by your talent. It was so beautiful and you used some really great words, throughout the piece. It was also descriptive, you really had the perfect balance between description and dialogue. It was completely compelling, and I really loved it.

I usually don't point out mistakes but I thought I might as well, since I only I found one mistake, where you contradict yourself: "We shuffle, which is the fastest we can manage to move" and then you say that "I (Fleur) RUN back.."

Well, I really adored the idea of this fic. The plot was different to what I had expected, and quite original (you come up with some really unique ideas). Thanks for participating in my challenge and for the great read! :)
- Charlotte
p.s I'm off to make your banner either tonight or tomorrow asap :P

Author's Response: awww don't worry about the wait. seriously, i'm behind on schedule for my own reviews...
gahhk! shuffling and running...you'd think i would have noticed that haha ;) i'll go back and change it when i shouldn't be getting ready to go out to lunch!!
you're so welcome, and thanks so much for the compliments and the review!! :)


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