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Review:krissyanne426 says:
Hello there, krissyanne426 from the forums here with your requested review. Sorry it's taken a bit longer than expected but real life got in the way. You know how that is!

I've actually started reading this at least half a dozen times. I always managed to get distracted, and that's nothing against your writing, but merely a fact of my life these days. But everytime I walked away, I always wanted to come back and finish it. It was super intriguing to me.

I like the darkness. I like dark stories, and this is really dark. The contrast between now and then was interesting, too. He seemed almost less human then, machine like or "Voldemort-ish", but definitely more death eater-y. And now, he seems like someone who is just lost. And I know that you probably know that, but it's definitely interesting, to me at least, that his perspective changes so much between then and now.

I honestly can't remember what you asked for in your request, so I hope this review kind of covered it. Your characterization is good. The story/your writing flows well and is enjoyable to read.

Great job!
Kristen=]

Author's Response: That compliment has certainly made me day, rest assured. ^^ I'm glad you liked the darkness of this story! 'Twas my first attempt at writing dark stuff, and to hear you thought it worked is a huge relief to me. =]

I can't honestly remember either... But your review was more than sufficient. ^^ Thank you for leaving such a kind review! Sorry for the lateness of the reply.

xoxoxo


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