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Review:TheProphecy says:
Hello :)

Sorry this took longer then expected...real life :(

Anyway to your story.

I like your characters, I think they are all believable and written fairly well considering most are OCs. I thought the sibling rivalry at the beginning of chap1 was good.

I thought there was a good amount of detail, you have clearly researched and thought about this lots. In fact some of it I recognised from my religious education lessons and thought 'oh yeah, I remember that' :)

I loved your emotions on what it is like being her at Hogwarts, how people stare and how she feels about being under the Hijab - that was right, Hijab I don't remember THAT MUCH from R.E ;)

I liked Jill as a character and I also liked how you wrote Lupin at the end of this one. :D I was thinking 'Aww!'

Overall I liked it, it was written well, flow was good and I enjoyed what I read.

Well done :)

Hannah

Author's Response: Hello, Hannah! :) It's not a problem, I totally understand! I myself have taken a long time to even respond the my reviews. :)
Thanks for the review, I found it very helpful! :) xx


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