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Review:TallestTower says:
How am I supposed to leave a coherent review after this? How am I supposed to write something worth reading once you've played with my emotions and understanding and left me in some kind of poetic, chaotic haze. I don't have the words so I'm blaming you instead, for taking the words. But you do wonderful things like this with words. God, I'm tired and now I've read this and I'd like to leave you a real review and I've ended up making you into a word-thief.

This really is taking it to a new level. I love the way you use second person. It's a tense I'd forgotten about in a way, and now you've rekindled the love. The connecting words, the unchronological parts. It's like a maze and I love how it all seems strung together in parts like that, it makes it have this delicate feel. Speaking of together, 'to get her'. Wow.

I love how exploritive you were with this piece. How you messed with the reader's mind. I first thought this was some kind of ship between Victoire and herself. Especially when she said 'For me?'. But I like that even if it wasn't Victoire with herself, the suggestion was still there and so it was there in a way. It was such a lovely twist. Victory, Victory. The mirror imagery at the end as they reach for the papers too... they are a reflection of each other, but very different too... it's perfection.

I suppose as we are only introduced to Victoire B at the end I always presumed it was Victoire Weasley, so I read it as her. But also the characters just seem to fit that way. The thoughts and feelings seem to belong To Victoire Weasley.

I loved so much of this. 'The Peals of the past never truly leave us.' One of the most inspired and delicate things I have read in a while. The word that strikes me is 'composed'. You have composed these words and the result is beautiful. You are so extroadinarily talented, I think I might give up except you are somehow extremely inspiring too.

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