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Review:Cirque Du Freak says:
With a narrator's voice in my head I couldn't help but crack up every other paragraph while reading this!

It was a truly brilliant idea for you to do this and it worked out really well because of the language you used throughout all of it even if some of it was quite casual in a way.

It was absolutely perfect and I love the whole 'predator' 'prey' thing there because it fit in so perfectly when it comes to trying to describe characters like Joanna going after different guys.

It was a really good read and I hope you do well in your challenges (:

x

Author's Response: Right?! It's definitely better with the narrator's voice, otherwise the language sounds out of place. xD

I am really glad you think it worked well. :) Oh yes, I just couldn't write it all the way super formal, because I noticed it was becoming too "heavy".

The predator and prey thing kind of worked itself into the story. The title changed a thousand times but I am happy that it fit well in the end. :)

Thanks for the lovely review, it put a very very big grin on my face. Take care. ^^

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