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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
dklfjghfdkghjdkljhlfkj FLAIL! GAAAH this is awesome! :D

You have a wonderful, wonderful way with words. You word wizard. This was beautiful. So at first I thought that Victoire was having a little bit of a mental breakdown (after killing Teddy? Or Teddy dying? Right?) and the 'other' Victoire was simply an inside voice. But no! The ending was a twist that wasn't expected, that she was having a relationship with another Victoire. Victory, victory. Awesome. Plus the repetition of Victoire, Victoire made it sound like the dying words of Teddy and was particularly effective.

So here's some quotes that were particularly fantastic, especially the way you repeated them, like a mantra:
- 'He wore sunglasses, you ran to the ocean, the sand arced the air, soaking the oxygen of daydreams and once, it was so easy to fall in love.'
- 'This is the rhythm of your life in patterned breaths.'
- 'The delicate constitution of words mangle in the chaos of kisses, the description of the abyss of desire fades and you hear the never ending sonata of his voice.'
- 'It is a night screaming stars.'

It could be on Victoire Weasley, but I think it might be on Victoire Bertrand. She was jealous of Victoire W's relationship with Teddy, and because Victoire W's some sort of Veela beauty, she had entrapped her and driven her to kill/hurt Teddy or something. I'm probably completely wrong.

Awesome one-shot. :)

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