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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
I love this! This is such a - ironically - powerful one shot. It's beautifully written, just be careful about repeating words. I get that they are meant to be mantra but sometimes it just feels a bit odd and disrupts flow, for example: 'My world was drowned in darkness, an abstract darkness harder to penetrate than any other darkness' Perhaps you could replace one of the 'darkness' with shadows or gloom or another synonym? I love the characterisation of the piece. It works really well, just like one of the massive monologues at the very end/the denoument when Voldy reveals all. I like how you wrote about each year, it proved very effective!

A very good one-shot, well done!

Author's Response: Hello!
Thanks dear! I get what you are saying about too much repetition- I will see what I can do about that. Voldemort's character was surprisingly one the easiest I've written- its kind of disturbing actually :)

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