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Review:Ellerina says:
AWW This was great! I really liked the way you linked the three generations together so nicely. At the same time though, each boy had his own issues to deal with and that was interesting to read about. My favorite was definitely James II because I really enjoyed his interaction with Lily II and the way you talked about the sort of "Potter effect". I've always thought something like that would happen in the future and I'm glad you sort of took that idea and looked at how it might shape the next gen characters a little more. (also, Albus as a Ravenclaw... very unique! I'd love to hear more about how you came to that decision about his character).

The only thing that gave me pause was the spacing, but I'm sure you've either already heard about that or have decided that it doesn't bother you. Either way, a great bit of writing and good luck in the duel!

Annie

Author's Response: Ooops, meant Albus was A gryff DATING a ravenclaw... and now I feel annoyed at myself since you obviously liked that! :(
Anyway, sorry about that! Yeah I'll check out the spacing, thanks a million.
The "potter effect". I may have to use that phrasing! Love it!
Love the next-gen characters, so happy you liked how I portrayed them!
Glad you liked it, thanks so much for reviewing!! :)


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