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Review:kaileena_sands says:
Wow! Good that the review swap made me come here, I really really like your idea of showing us the three generations of Potters together! :)

Characterisation - I think that you are spot on all three of them. I like your interpretation of James I and how he was beginning to both love and hate Lily for the feelings she brought in him. You've got a natural flare for descriptions - "Her flashing green eyes, her hair coming free from the ponytail that had whipped around her head as she had strode towards him and her delicate features, contorted with anger made her simultaneously more beautiful, and more repulsive than James had thought possible." Chilling!

Harry on the other hand is very much the boy with the hero complex we know from the books - excellent work! I cannot write him if my life depended on it. James II I think is a good approximation of what a Potter born in time of peace could turn out. I like that all hope on him is not lost yet. xD

And speaking of hope - I love love love your idea of uniting the three Potters under the same theme - their hopefulness about the future. The repeat of the phrase you use is powerful!

Excellent one-shot, good work. :)

Author's Response: Oh my god, really? What an amazing review! Chilling?? Wow! *tries to compose herself*

You really got what I wanted to come accross with all three characters, I was so worried about that! The poor boys really do have it bad, despite the song is angsty I had to give them some hope! I plan to write more on all three pairings, maybe a one shot about this form each of the girls points of view?

Anyway, I'm so glad we did this swap too! What a lovely review to read just before bed, I'll have such a happy sleep now :L


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