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Review:SearchingForLuna says:
YEAH THAT’S RIGHT ROSE BE SMOOTH.

(I'm baaack! But I'll probably be reviewing at a slower pace, just to take a breather.)

Your descriptions were funny and sharp and I really enjoyed reading them. I also LOVED the quote:

“Honestly, I didn’t even know one was supposed to clean under the refrigerator.”

It made me laugh, especially with the later scenes where the men ask if she’s supposed to be at home cleaning and she replies, “I have a boyfriend for that.” I was like HIGH FIVE MOMOTWINS.

I'm trying to find some criticism to vary from all of my rave reviews. Hmmm. THIS IS TOO CANON. *angry face*

Onto the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Yay you're back! I hope you like this story too :D

Hahaha, the fridge line is a bit of a personal anecdote - when I went to college, I lived in a studio apartment dorm room with my sister and we had monthly cleaning inspections. We failed the first one because they checked UNDER the knobs of the stove. We had no idea they even came off.

*high five* Heck yeah haha. Rose is not the domestic one. A reviewer once called them a non-traditional family. So true!

I'm so glad you liked the opening chapter! *jumps up and down* Thank you for the wonderful review!


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