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Review:redherring says:
Firstly, The Script = love. And the song is brilliant so I listened to it while reading this :D Secondly, I'm so sorry for not getting round to this sooner - I know it's been a while you requested a review and I don't even have a decent excuse, so I do apologise. Thirdly, I really rather enjoyed this!

I really like the idea for it - there's something very refreshing about a Scorose fic where they don't work out and live happily ever after. I felt the plot was realistic too - a couple of mates going out for a drink to get over a relationship is definitely the kind of thing that happens in real life xD I thought Scorpius was well characterised and I especially liked Albus there at the beginning.

I do feel it was all a little rushed, though, everything seemed to happen rather quickly. A little more detail in places, perhaps? I also felt the ending could have had more impact, it was a little weak in my opinion, as well as a little abrupt.

Something I really liked, though, was the use of the lyrics - they can often feel somewhat superfluous in songfics, but here I really thought they actually added something to the piece. Overall, very nice job with this, and again I'm very sorry for the wait :(

Author's Response: Hey! Don't worry about the lateness of the review, I understand :) Thank you for taking the time to do this.

I've not read a ScoRose fic that hasn't ended happily so I thought I'd do one myself. I tried to make it realistic so i'm glad you thought it was so :)

Thanks for the criticism. When I get around to reviewing and editing this, I'll definitely take into account what you've said.

Thanks again! ^^

-Sophia x


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