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Review:BrightStar says:
Wow. I liked your writing style and everything before but this is amazingly written... "And it was just Teddy and Victoire and Victoire and Teddy and everyone else watching were just mere flies on their windshield, a scraped windshield that did not know how it would be fixed. If it could be."
That sentence is brilliant!
At first I was like "Shut up Victoire, you love Teddy", I'm putting the finishing touches on a Tedoire at the moment and so I'm pretty hardcore about this. But yeah... as it went on I was more torn.
The only thing I noticed is that in the flashback Lysander was both 15 and 16... Though considering sme of the confusion I've had in my own writing this is nothing!
My favourite thing was about the flowers, I really liked the way you foucused on them... and then the end, when it all made sense about the flowers... Wow! Sorry for saying wow so much but it's exactly what I mean. Brilliant work! Favouriting :)

Author's Response: hello, once more! im so happy you liked this! and yes, that quote is my favorite part of the shot :D :D :D

yeah, i get what you say! My beta Gingersnape is also a hardcore Tedoire fanatic, but with these I got to change her mind and let Victoire have options :)

really? oops. How could Ginger not catch that? Ill find and fix ASAP :D
yay! i Love the flowers thing, and then when it all came together. No, that's okay, im ecstatic you like saying wow so much :D thanks so muuch!!!

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