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Review:redherring says:
Another fabulous chapter! I must say, I rather love your Draco, and Pansy was, again, fantastic - 'I'm tired and you're being a prat, that's what's going on.' - and the rest of the Slythies were brilliant as well. I loved their interaction and the little bit of banter they had going on: 'Are we insulting Draco now?' Blaise joined in. 'Oh, good, I like doing that.'

I also have a slightly disproportionate amount of love for the nickname 'Tweed girl'. I sort of grin idiotically every time I see it on the screen. It's just such a Draco-ish thing to say/think, and in an odd way it seems to suit your Astoria down to the ground xP Love it! :)

Author's Response: Ahh, it's good you like Draco in this, I think he's a wee bit OOC or something - more like a doormat than anything, really. Pansy's fun to write. She's slightly mean, but in a kind of sensible and forward-thinking way. I see her as the sort of no-nonsense one who picks up the pieces.

Ah, I love the word banter :')

I think that, yeah, with the nickname Tweed Girl I was trying to get across this Draco-ish attitude of not really liking this girl very much and giving her a kind of mocking name, but then actually wanting to find out who she is but not actually remembering her name so keeping this silly nickname thing going. If that makes sense? Ahha. There's supposed to be a theme of memories and forgetting, so all of Draco's forgetfulness is very deliberate.

Thanks very much for the review! Looking forward to hearing what you think of later chapters (:

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