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Review:LadyMalfoy23 says:
Hm, this is interesting! lol Im here with the review you requested! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you but as due to RL i have been very busy!! And im extremly sorry.

Now on to the review. All in all i found this to be a very interesting story. I have never read a story like this and it was different that is for sure. I think that in some areas it seemed to drag on and have some unnecisarry details that distracted me from the initial plot. Also, im not sure if you meant it to be this way, but you seem to have the timeline all out of wack here. Its just a pet peeve of mine, and if that was how you meant it to be then just ignore that!! ^_^ hehe

All in all i really did enjoy your story. The characterization was wonderful and the ential story in itseld was great!! Good job!!

Jess xx

Author's Response: Yeah, The time line is out of whack, hence the AU warning in the summary. I want to rewrite it at some point, but haven't had the time.

I wasn't sure other than the canon issues where I needed to tweak things. I was trying very hard to keep it in the challenge space of just one day.

Thanks for coming to look it over! I've got some better ideas of what to work on now. :)

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