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Review:Toujours Padfoot says:
Hiii!

Can I just start off by gushing that this is from a man's perspective? About 99.9 percent of fics are from a female's POV, so this is severely refreshing. So refreshing, in fact, that I don't think I will be thirsty for at least three days.

The premise is interesting, the plot is promising, the flow is good. The characters are shaping themselves well. I think my favorite part is Teddy's fear that his parents would be a bit disappointed in him becoming a Healer instead of an Auror. It added an extra dose of realism to your story, getting inside his head like that and knowing his thoughts and fears.

The only CC I have for you is to perhaps use only one blank space between paragraphs. ^_^ Otherwise, the chapter looks misleadingly long, and some people with short attention spans might not read it.

I like Teddy. He isn't oozing with confidence. He's real and pretty easy to like. Remus would have been proud. :)

Author's Response: Hi!
Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like that factor. Personally, I find it more challenging to write from a male's perspective, and have written another one shot accordingly :D Thank you :)
Yay! Finally someone who sees what I was trying to get at with the getting inside Ted's head, and seeing his emotions. Ahh.
Oh, yeah every time I put only one space, it adds like, another five for each space, so I promise the spacing isn't my choice. However, I've found a way to fix it, and will be doing so very soon.
I'm glad you like Teddy and you think he's realistic. And I totally agree. Remus would have been proud :)


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