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Review:ericajen says:
Why must you insist on breaking my heart all the time?

Heh, really though, this was beautiful. And you know how much I adore your writing anyway. This was really great, though. I loved the way it developed throughout. I mean, for awhile, I was really expecting her to show up and everything. I was thinking a happy ending was on it's way. And then bam, she's actually dead.

The way you wrote Wesley's feelings was amazing. It seemed so effortless but perfect at the same time. I really felt like I could connect with him, which is of course a big part of writing.

Well done! You really impress with this one(:


Author's Response: Awww, thank you! This story hasn't gotten too much attention, and it was nice to hear an opinion on it.

I'm sorry it's depressing! Gah. I do that a lot. I'm so mean to fictional characters. I make them all angsty and it gets it out of my system, so that I can be sugary butterflies all day. XD

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. You are pretty much the sweetest reviewer ever.

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