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Review:TheProphecy says:
Hello,

Hannah from the threads here!! Sorry this took so long, my internet was down last week, then real life caught up with me and then the riddle hunt!

Anyway, I liked your beginning, the opening was very mysterious and very well written. I really like your writing style, and no grammar was out of place that I could spot.

I like you development of each character, I like all their thoughts and feeling etc. I feel you have written them all very well. :) Especially Alyssa, she is one of my favourites in your story :D

I actually found this chapter fairly amusing with the Alyssa bit at the table, then again I do have a warped sense of humour.

My main criticism is that I keep getting confused who everyone is, If you could start to make that clearer in the later chapters, although I understand if you want to keep and air of mystery to it.

Overall I liked it. Well done :)

TheProphecy

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!

I'm so happy that someone likes Alyssa! I feel that I might have given her a very little spot and some people have commented on that it's hard to really find her person, I quite like her... she's very ambitious... hehehe...

Absolutely I will think about making the swaps clearer and the personalities very separate.

Again thank you very very very much for the review :)

*huggles*

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