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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hello again!

Ooh!! What a wonderful chapter! Seriously, I really enjoyed this one! Again, a bit too much descriptions for my liking, but I did get a good sense of the character's personality from them! Nice descriptions of the room mates. I really liked how elaborate your characters/families are developed - Like how Emmett is a THOMAS and the son of Dean Thomas and Demelza Robins (interesting match - and I love it!) AHH Albus Potter, Emmett, Andre and Scorpius seem so hot! ;)

Especially Emmett and Andre. Nice names. Scorpius, not so much. Which is weird because I usually love him. He and Rose reminds me of James/Lily in the Marauders Era! Great work on the characters! It was nice to see Bree get some conversation with Albus ^_^

And I really loved the whole action in this chapter. The ending especially. It was unexpected, and I loved the little lie :) The excuse was also weird and wacky, I look forward to reading about her detention hopefully! Lovely writing!

-charlotte ;)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I must admit, I'm guilty of forgetting about Bree's detention completely- that's what comes of never planning. Oops. I'm sorry you don't like Scorpius as much :( I wanted to give him and Rose a James/Lily sort of match since the rest of the romances in the piece are easier. Also, I imagine Rose as a Daddy's girl, and I think she would have taken what he said in her first year to heart. Anyway I'm glad you liked it (and Emmett- he's one of my favourites)

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