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Review:veracity says:
I loved this chapter!
It's a great first chapter that really sets up the story, but without giving too much away. And you're on my good side already because, and thank you for this, you did not get into an elaborate description of what a "hawtie" Lily is, or how her emerald eyes glisten in the morning light... You get the idea.
Anyway, I think this is a really original idea! Unlike all those fics about Lily/James that just seem to drag on forever and seem to tell their entire life stories without incident, yours actually has a pretty snazzy plot.
Can't wait to read more! (:

Author's Response: thanks! you won't believe this, but the reason i didnt get into how hawt they are is.. cause im sorta bad at describing stuff. heh. well, at least i was when i wrote the first chapter of this. i like to think that i've improved since then :)
Thanks for the review!!!

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